deviant art

Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
[x]
Download Image
PNG, 550×800
more ▶

More from ~audelade

Featured in Groups:

Details

October 15, 2012
257 KB
550×800
Link
Thumb

Statistics

Comments: 12
Favourites: 141 [who?]

Views: 2,190 (8 today)
Downloads: 16 (0 today)
[x]
:iconaudelade:
Sketch that I colored yesterday.



book suddenly got thicker
Add a Comment:
 
:iconfallliingmoon:
~Fallliingmoon Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow... beautiful job! Well done! I love the book and his hair. I haven't seen artwork like this in so long. If I may be a picky jerk for a bit (and if you accept constructive criticism on the small things), could I give some constructive criticism? The book's pages seem very neat, unruffled. For some advice I'd like to point out that you have the book very well done but while reading a book or just opening it, some pages tend to stick out as they are bound to the spine (which is also bent to open the book) so you'd have to hold a newer book's pages in place. (I'm a bookworm, though, so I can understand if you skip that point.) Also, where is the light source? The hair is slicked back and shiny, so unless there is some real shadow there I'd believe it, but the shoulders, forearms and both wrists have lighting and hip of the clothes is shaded so I can't really point out a definite source. For a suggestion, I recommend putting stronger lighting in the face of the light source, and not put so definite lighting on parts farther away. I hope I've helped and, if I haven't, well it's all cool, right?
Reply
:iconaudelade:
I don't mind a constructive critique, and thank you!
Reply
:iconfallliingmoon:
~Fallliingmoon Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad to help. :)
Reply
:iconsynnewarrior:
always nice skyrim pics as always :3
Reply
:iconaudelade:
thank you as always~~
Reply
:iconannathelle26:
~Annathelle26 Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really nice pic!:)
Reply
:iconaudelade:
thank youC:
Reply
:icontruekitty:
~Truekitty Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE your drawing style! : D

Keep it up |3
Reply
:icontruekitty:
~Truekitty Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Np |3
Reply
Add a Comment: